When I think of you, I dream of surrender.

Faithe J Day
2 min readMar 27, 2025

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Whenever I write, I usually have a line or a song that influences my writing, and this week, I have been turning around a line in my head that has still not completely turned into a poem.

The line is “Marriage is a license to kill,” and while I’m not yet sure how I want to write about it or explore it, the following poem is what came after I explored my feelings about this statement. I hope you enjoy it!

“When I think of you, I dream of surrender” by FJDay

I crave your touch and harsh tone

the gruffness and grabbing feeling in your hands

When you’re in the zone

And the sound of your voice when you remember to moan

I can spend days swimming in your mind and melding with your soul

When we’re close, it’s like you’re inside of my skin

So close that you become my next of kin

I want to consume you

You taste like honey, and black pepper, and cayenne

Like sweat and cum

I want to suck the taste of me off of your thumb

I want to feel your heart like the beat of a drum

I want to vibrate your name and feel it hum

There is a fire that sparks between us

An ignition of something raw and untamed

And when I wrap my legs around you

There’s nothing I can’t see

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Faithe J Day
Faithe J Day

Written by Faithe J Day

Writer, Creator, and Educator. Millennial and Internet Expert. Learn more at https://fjday.com

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